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i think i forgot some paper in the hotel.it is so important .Write the letter for the hotel's manager

i think i forgot some paper in the hotel. it is so important. Write the letter for the hotel's manager Vrx5J
Dear Sir Bobby, I am writing this letter to present to you a small problems in your hotel. I think I have forgotten my some important papers in the hotel on Monday of this week. it is my fault but I need your help in this situation. Maybe, I forgot it in the meeting room after I had finished the conference. I think I left them at the table with the number 20 on it. I tried to find it many times and places I think I left them but up to now I have still not found them. With you, it is some normal papers as other normal paper you see but it is so important to me. They are the contract of my company, the documents and data I spent one month to collect from many resouses for this conference. The data and document I can find it again but I can not tell to my manager I lost the company’s contract. I will lost my job. I hope you can ask your staffs who cleaned the room to check again for me. If they gave it to front office department you can check it for me. I expect to see the good information from you. Thank you so much! Your sincerely, Kiên Nhẫn
Dear Sir Bobby,

I am writing this letter to present to you a
small
problems
in your hotel. I
think
I have forgotten my
some
important
papers in the hotel on Monday of this week.
it
is my fault
but
I need your
help
in this situation.

Maybe, I forgot it in the meeting room after I had finished the conference. I
think
I
left
them at the table with the number 20 on it. I tried to find it
many
times and places I
think
I
left
them
but
up to
now
I have
still
not found them.

With you, it is
some
normal papers as other normal paper you
see
but
it is
so
important
to me. They are the contract of my
company
, the documents and data I spent one month to collect from
many
resouses
for this conference. The data and document I can find it again
but
I can not
tell
to my manager I lost the
company
’s contract. I will
lost
my job.

I hope you can ask your staffs who cleaned the room to
check
again for me. If they gave it to front office department you can
check
it for me.

I
expect
to
see
the
good
information from you. Thank you
so
much!

Your
sincerely
,

Kiên
Nhẫn
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IELTS letter i think i forgot some paper in the hotel. it is so important. Write the letter for the hotel's manager

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
215 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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