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asking for advice how to teach young learners at school

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Dear Mr. Demo, My name is Lusy Brown. I am an English teacher in Secondary school and I have just begun my career as a teacher. I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice how to teach young learners. My first problem is about working with children. I have never taught them before. So that I don't know what methods used during the lesson. Can you advice me other interesting methods to teach my pupils. Besides I should mention I am not satisfied with my pupils knowledge. I organize extra class after school. But, I could not shoose materials for preparing my pupils. What materials or books I utilize for beginners? Hope your advice will change the things. I would appreciate it if you could give me your advice as soon as possible. your sincerely, Lucy Brawn

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