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Application letter to director of school

Application letter to director of school 0nD69
Dear Sir. I am writing to you a letter to apply for a job as an English teacher. It would be appreciate if you could help me as can asI am 32 years old and l have been working a local school for 5 years. I have seen an advertisement which is published in " Voice of Uzbekistan". Owing to l have got part time job, l also wanted to study in your school. As my qualifications, l know english fluently. Not only english but also other foreign languages of the world are related to my intelligent lifeI was awarded many diplomas and certificates. If you give me a. full -time job in your school, lt would be attentively. l look forward to recieving good newsYours sincerelyMartha Ruth.
Dear Sir. I am writing to you a letter to apply for a job as an English teacher. It would be
appreciate
if you could
help
me as can
asI
am 32 years
old
and l have been working a local school for 5 years. I have
seen
an advertisement which
is published
in
"
Voice of Uzbekistan
"
. Owing to l have
got
part time
job, l
also
wanted to study in your school. As my qualifications, l know
english
fluently
. Not
only
english
but
also
other foreign languages of the world
are related
to my intelligent
lifeI
was awarded
many
diplomas and certificates. If you give me a. full -time job in your school,
lt
would be
attentively
.
l
look forward to
recieving
good
newsYours
sincerelyMartha
Ruth.
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IELTS letter Application letter to director of school

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
128 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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