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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Dear sir, Good day. This is Maged (your neighbor), I am writing to yo to apologize for any disturbance caused by the noise from my house that day. My wife and I were celebrating my promotion that we wre waitng for almost four years. we got overwhelmed by the news that we played music so high and we danced all night that we forgot about the whole world, as I have been promoted to a department manager, my income will jump up to approximately the double. I apologize again and I promise that it will never happen again, we will control ourselves next time, although I have reached the top level and there is no more promotions. Finally, would you accept my invitation for you and your family to dinner next weekend as an apology for your disturbance Note: My wife is a great cook. Waithing for your reply. Yours, Maged

Dear sir,

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Good
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 that day.

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 for almost four years. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.We
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got
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so
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).high, and
high and
 we danced all night that we forgot about the whole world, as I have been promoted
 to a department manager, my income will jump up to approximately the double.

I apologize Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).again, and
again and
 I promise that it will never happen again, we will control ourselves next
 time, although I have reached the top level and there is no more promotions.

Finally
, would you accept my invitation for you and your family to dinner next
 weekend as an apology for your disturbance

Note: My wife is a great cook.

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Waithing
 for your reply.

Yours,

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Maged

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter

American English

10 paragraphs

150 words

5.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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