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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Dear sir, Good day. This is Maged (your neighbor), I am writing to yo to apologize for any disturbance caused by the noise from my house that day. My wife and I were celebrating my promotion that we wre waitng for almost four years. we got overwhelmed by the news that we played music so high and we danced all night that we forgot about the whole world, as I have been promoted to a department manager, my income will jump up to approximately the double. I apologize again and I promise that it will never happen again, we will control ourselves next time, although I have reached the top level and there is no more promotions. Finally, would you accept my invitation for you and your family to dinner next weekend as an apology for your disturbance Note: My wife is a great cook. Waithing for your reply. Yours, Maged
Dear sir,

Good
day.

This is
Maged
(your neighbor), I am writing to yo to apologize for any disturbance caused by the noise from my
house
that day.

My wife and I were celebrating my promotion that we
wre
waitng
for almost four years.
we
got
overwhelmed by the news that we played music
so
high and
we danced all night that we forgot about the whole world, as I have
been promoted
to a department manager, my income will jump up to approximately the double.

I apologize
again and
I promise that it will never happen again, we will control ourselves
next
time, although I have reached the top level and there is no more promotions.

Finally
, would you accept my invitation for you and your family to dinner
next
weekend as an apology for your disturbance

Note: My wife is a great cook.

Waithing
for your reply.

Yours,

Maged
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
10 paragraphs
150 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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