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Application to full time job to the agency.

Application to full time job to the agency. 26oqJ
Dear Mr Sands, I am writing to apply for the job of guide, as advertised in Monday's Courant newspaper. This is an ideal job for me given my enthusiasm, my related experiences and qualifications. I live in Rose which is next to your Tourist agency. I studied in the government school therefore, I had a spare time to learn language and I studied English, Russian, France, Spanish In my academic years. To come to say my quality that i chose to take a DTCE Diploma in Spanish. I hold the following qualification B2 for my English. Furthermore, I achieved a high degree from my history. In addition, two years ago, I was employed as a history teacher so I know in - depth. As you see from my CV, I have taken an opportunity to going extra qualification that were given by college which will help me to take part time work. In all honestly, I recognise all of the parts' of city and I think I would be suitable candidate for this job. If you find me fit in the job description, I wish you send me meeting entry requirements. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, George Grant.
Dear Mr Sands, I am writing to apply for the
job
of guide, as advertised in Monday's
Courant
newspaper. This is an ideal
job
for me
given
my enthusiasm, my related experiences and qualifications. I
live
in Rose which is
next
to your Tourist agency. I studied in the
government
school
therefore
, I had a spare time to learn language and I studied English, Russian, France, Spanish In my academic years. To
come
to say my quality that
i
chose to take a
DTCE
Diploma in Spanish. I hold the following qualification B2 for my English.
Furthermore
, I achieved a high degree from my history.
In addition
, two years ago, I
was employed
as a history teacher
so
I know in
-
depth. As you
see
from my CV, I have taken an opportunity to going extra qualification that were
given
by college which will
help
me to take
part time
work. In all
honestly
, I
recognise
all of the
parts' of city and I
think
I would be suitable candidate for this
job
. If you find me fit in the
job
description, I wish you
send
me meeting entry requirements. I look forward to hearing from you as
soon
as possible. Yours
sincerely
, George Grant.
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IELTS letter Application to full time job to the agency.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
206 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
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