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appication supervisor hcm hotel m8PWA
bien thi hong hausupervisor * personal informationdate of birth: 27/08/1993address: binh dinh districemail: huuhauhang@gmail. comcareer objectives short - term objectives: i want to become a professtion supervisor and professtion envinoem workplacelong- term objectives: i want to become a manager with high salary and promtion * educationquy nhon universitymajor: vietnamhoc majorjune 2011-june 2015* skillenglish and chiness* experience2015-2018 room attendantserving customer, making up rooom and checking room 2018-2022 supervisorchecking room, assiging duty attendant, supporingt staff and manager
bien
thi
hong
hausupervisor
* personal
informationdate
of birth: 27/08/1993address:
binh
dinh
districemail
:
huuhauhang@gmail
.
comcareer
objectives short
-
term objectives:
i
want to become a
professtion
supervisor and
professtion
envinoem
workplacelong
- term objectives:
i
want to become a manager with high salary and
promtion
*
educationquy
nhon
universitymajor
:
vietnamhoc
majorjune
2011-june 2015*
skillenglish
and
chiness
* experience2015-2018 room
attendantserving
customer, making up
rooom
and checking room 2018-2022
supervisorchecking
room,
assiging
duty attendant,
supporingt
staff and
manager
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IELTS letter appication supervisor hcm hotel

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
74 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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