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Apologizing letter for not working extra hours

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Dear Mr Parker, I am writing to express my sincere apology for not being able to fulfill my promise that I would not work extra hours at the weekend according to my family problem with husband. I am sincerely sorry for upsetting you not working properly as soon as possible. Due to my family relationship between my husband and I were quarrel with each other on sharing the house affairs and the more had I run into many issues, the more would I not capable of handling the situation. The main reason for this kind of matter, We moved our house from village to city hall owing to exchanging jobs to another company. Moreover I faced with some local inconvenience as well as financial services which was not higher enough. Then we needed to get connected to the available updates. To sum up I am very disappointed with this kind of matter and apologize for not being able to fulfill the past promise. I look forward to hearing from your forgiveness. Yours faithfullyMrs Sarah.
Dear Mr Parker, I am writing to express my sincere apology for not being able to fulfill my promise that I would not work extra hours at the weekend according to my family problem with husband. I am
sincerely
sorry for upsetting you not working
properly
as
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soon
as possible. Due to my family relationship between my husband and I were quarrel with each other on sharing the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
affairs and the more had I run into
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many
issues, the more would I not capable of handling the situation. The main reason for this kind of matter, We
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moved
our
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house
from village to city hall owing to exchanging jobs to another
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company
.
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Moreover
I faced with
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some
local inconvenience
as well
as financial services which was not higher
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enough
. Then we needed to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
connected to the available updates. To sum up I am
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very
disappointed with this kind of matter and apologize for not being able to fulfill the past promise. I look forward to hearing from your forgiveness. Yours
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faithfullyMrs
Sarah.
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IELTS letter Apologizing letter for not working extra hours

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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