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Write a letter to your friend. In your letter thank your friend for the invitation. explain why you won’t be able to attend. suggest another time to see your friend.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter thank your friend for the invitation. explain why you won’t be able to attend. suggest another time to see your friend. ebM3J
Dear Rahul, Advanced happy birthday wishes to my best buddy. First, I am happy to say that you would be joining the thirties club next week, just like me. I received your invitation but I am sorry to tell you that I will not be able to attend your special day owing prior commitment. You know that the financial year end is approaching and my company has set some sales targets and road-side exhibition next week to improve sales. There is no exception to anyone on my team to miss the planned event. Management notified my team on the same two months back. First weekend of next month, I am planning to visit you and have already notified my team on my unavailability. We can plan a long drive on a car and a country side dinner. Are you in? Just let me know. Lots of love and God bless you my friend. Your friend, Tarun.
Dear Rahul,

Advanced happy birthday wishes to my best buddy.
First
, I am happy to say that you would be joining the thirties club
next
week,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
like me.

I received your invitation
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I am sorry to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you that I will not be able to attend your special day owing prior commitment. You know that the financial year
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
is approaching and my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
has set
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
sales targets and road-side exhibition
next
week to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
sales.

There is no exception to anyone on my team to miss the planned
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
. Management notified my team on the same two months back.

First
weekend of
next
month, I am planning to visit you and have already notified my team on my unavailability. We can plan a long drive on a car and a country side dinner. Are you in?
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know.

Lots of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
and God bless you my friend.

Your friend,

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Tarun
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend. In your letter thank your friend for the invitation. explain why you won’t be able to attend. suggest another time to see your friend.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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