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An English friend wants to visit France for a short holiday and has written asking you for advice and information as you have been living in Paris for 4 years.

An English friend wants to visit France for a short holiday and has written asking you for advice and information as you have been living in Paris for 4 years. 0EYpn
Hello, Sabina! How is it going? I hope you are well. It was great to get your letter. It is really exciting that you are visiting France and I can't wait to meet you. I'm more than happy to give you some information. Firstly, regarding your accommodation arrangement, if you want you can stay with me for these 2 weeks. As you know I am living alone in my apartment and it would be pleased to share it with you whether you would not to spend for an accomodation. Otherwise, if you prefer I can easly book you a cheap but a comfortable hotel so that you can be more independent. Secondly, it will give me a chance to take you around, as you did so kindly for me when I was in England. There are lots of things to do in my city. If I were you, I’d visit the Eifel Tower first of all. What would Paris be without its symbolic the Eiffel Tower? Then you can visit the distinguished Notre-Dame Cathedral and the Versailles Palace. Also you ought to go to the world’s most visited museum the Louvre. Besides there are many others the world-famous places to visit in Paris. You don’t need to bring a lot of clothes because the weather is normally warm and sunny, and of course, rainy. However, in the evening it’s a bit cooler, that you may need a jacket. Please let me know exactly when you're coming so that I can meet you at the airport. It’ll be great to see you again so we can get up-to-date with all our news! Love, Tori
Hello, Sabina!

How is it going? I hope you are well. It was great to
get
your letter. It is
really
exciting that you are visiting France and I can't wait to
meet
you. I'm more than happy to give you
some
information.

Firstly
, regarding your accommodation arrangement, if you want you can stay with me for these 2 weeks. As you know I am living alone in my apartment and it would be
pleased
to share it with you whether you would not to spend for an
accomodation
.
Otherwise
, if you prefer I can
easly
book you a
cheap
but
a comfortable hotel
so
that you can be more independent.

Secondly
, it will give me a chance to take you around, as you did
so
kindly for me when I was in England. There are lots of things to do in my city. If I were you, I’d visit the
Eifel
Tower
first of all
. What would Paris be without its symbolic the Eiffel Tower? Then you can visit the distinguished Notre-Dame Cathedral and the Versailles Palace.
Also
you ought to go to the world’s most visited museum the Louvre.
Besides
there are
many
others the world-
famous
places to visit in Paris.

You don’t need to bring
a lot of
clothes
because
the weather is
normally
warm and sunny, and
of course
, rainy.
However
, in the evening it’s a bit cooler, that you may need a jacket.

Please
let
me know exactly when you're coming
so
that I can
meet
you at the airport. It’ll be great to
see
you again
so
we can
get
up-to-date with all our news!

Love
,

Tori
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IELTS letter An English friend wants to visit France for a short holiday and has written asking you for advice and information as you have been living in Paris for 4 years.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
272 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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