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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take nrDe
Dear my neighbours, I'm here your neighbour Nguyễn Anh Kiệt. I have just get your complainment, I really really sorry about the noise that I have made. The noise that you recently heard is actually my wife make it, lately these day she has a illness, I think the illness that she got has some sind of pregnate, so she taking very loud and also angry all the time so she all ways try to cause trouble to attract my attention. So very very sory about the noise that my family have made, very very sorry. But don't worry I'm not a bastard I know what to do, I plan to noise prove my house really and also take care of my wife more often to guaranteed for her to not cause any troubel and crazy noise any more. I very very sorry abot that and make sure that will not happen aggain. Your neighbour Kiêt
Dear my
neighbours
,

I'm here your
neighbour
Nguyễn
Anh
Kiệt
. I have
just
get
your
complainment
, I
really
really
sorry about the
noise
that I have made. The
noise
that you recently heard is actually my wife
make
it, lately
these day
she has
a
illness, I
think
the illness that she
got
has
some
sind
of
pregnate
,
so
she taking
very
loud and
also
angry all the time
so
she
all ways
try to cause trouble to attract my attention.
So
very
very
sory
about the
noise
that my family have made,
very
very
sorry.
But
don't worry I'm not a bastard I know what to do, I plan to
noise
prove my
house
really
and
also
take care of my wife more
often
to guaranteed for her to not cause any
troubel
and crazy
noise
any more
.

I
very
very
sorry
abot
that and
make
sure that will not happen
aggain
.

Your
neighbour


Kiêt
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
155 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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