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After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: • Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing • Express your appreciation • And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

Dear Tom, My name is Katerine Saavedra, i am the person who you helped in the motorbike accident last Saturday, near to the shopping Centre. My intention to write this short email is express my gratitude for your help, and invite you to special dinner in my home the next Saturday. Once again thank you for your support and guidance in everything, special with the procedures with the police and with the insurance in that moment. Until now all the request to these entities has been solved, for example my motorcycle was repaired and also I have made all my visits to the doctors without any payment. After one month that it occurred, my family and I are planning to invite you and your family to our house next Saturday at 7pm. We want to prepare a special and traditional dinner, offering Colombian, Mexican and Mediterranean food, furthermore a musical group will perform. I will be so glad if you can come. Your faithfully Kate saavedra
Dear Tom,

My name is
Katerine
Saavedra,
i
am the person who you
helped
in the motorbike accident last Saturday, near to the shopping
Centre
. My intention to write this short email is express my gratitude for your
help
, and invite you to special dinner in my home the
next
Saturday.

Once again thank you for your support and guidance in everything, special with the procedures with the police and with the insurance
in that moment
. Until
now
all the request to these entities has
been solved
,
for example
my motorcycle
was repaired
and
also
I have made all my visits to the doctors without any payment.

After one month that it occurred, my family and I are planning to invite you and your family to our
house
next
Saturday at 7pm. We want to prepare a special and traditional dinner, offering Colombian, Mexican and Mediterranean food,
furthermore
a musical group will perform.

I will be
so
glad if you can
come
.

Your
faithfully


Kate
saavedra
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IELTS letter After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: • Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing • Express your appreciation • And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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