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Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, -state how long you will be away -tell them what needs to be done. -state how you will compensate them.

Dear Ami, Hi, I hope you are in good health. I am writing this letter because I need a favor from you as I will be going out of town so I would request if you kindly take care of my pet for a period of one week. It would be a great help if you take care of my pet brownie because for some family rituals I need to go to my hometown. Likewise, I can trust you as a best person to look after my brownie after me. Duration of my trip will not more than a week’s time. Moreover, for better clarification I already made a note and stuck that note in a wall which is adjacent to the main door. Additionally, I purchased a readymade food packet to feed him. My dog’s characteristics are very calm and quiet and he easily dwells up with you. Alternatively, you can ring or text me whenever required. Indicatively, I will make sure that we will have a great time once I return, for rendering me such a great help and taking care in this critical phase of my life. I am planning to have a one day trip for both of us as an antidote to tranquilize apart from our busy schedule. Thank you once again and hope to see you soon. Yours sincerely, Tara
Dear
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Ami
,

Hi, I hope you are in
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good
health. I am writing this letter
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because
I need a favor from you as I will be going out of town
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so
I would request if you kindly take care of my pet for a period of one week.

It would be a great
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help
if you take care of my pet brownie
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because
for
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some
family rituals I need to go to my hometown.
Likewise
, I can trust you as
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a
best person to look after my brownie after me. Duration of my trip will not more than a week’s time.

Moreover
, for better clarification I already made a note and stuck that note in a wall which is adjacent to the main door.
Additionally
, I
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purchased
a
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readymade
food packet to feed him. My dog’s characteristics are
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very
calm and
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quiet and
he
easily
dwells up with you.
Alternatively
, you can ring or text me whenever required.

Indicatively
, I will
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make
sure that we will have a great time once I return, for rendering me such a great
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help
and taking care in this critical phase of my life. I am planning to have a
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one day
trip for both of us as an antidote to tranquilize apart from our busy schedule.

Thank you once again and hope to
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see
you
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soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

Tara

IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, -state how long you will be away -tell them what needs to be done. -state how you will compensate them.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
225 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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