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You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write a letter to the manager. In the letter: • describe what the group does • explain why the group is good for the community • suggest alternative days and times for practice

Dear Manager, My name is Katerine Saavedra, i am a member of the group of musicians who practices in the community hall. We are a classical music group, who helps in church's celebration every sunday, all 10 members of this group are young women from the Catolic School. As i mentioned before this group participates and help in church's service once a week; with the intention to share our melodies and create a beautiful environment in the participants, we have been receive a lot support and appretiation for this community since we started. I would like to suggest if is possible to use this space at least every saturday from 5pm to 8pm, because at this time the place is empty and quiet, or another day but at the same time. It is the only time that everyone can practice in the group. Please let us know your decision Kindly Regards. kate Saavedra

Dear Manager,

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 are young women from the Possible spelling mistake found.Catholic
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 School.

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help
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beautiful
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receive
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a lot support
 and Possible spelling mistake found.appreciation
appretiation
 for this community since we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
.

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use
 this space at least every Possible spelling mistake found.SaturdaySaturdayssturdy
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 from 5pm to 8pm, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 at this time the place is empty and quiet, or another day This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 at the same time. It is the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 time that everyone can practice in the group.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 us know your decision

Kindly Regards.

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kate
 Saavedra