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After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him / her know why you are writing to him / her Express your gratitude Offer him / her to visit your home with his / her family

After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him / her know why you are writing to him / her Express your gratitude Offer him / her to visit your home with his / her family 2E3k
Dear Mr. Francis I am Rohan John, I hope you remember me. I am writing this letter to let you know that how thankful me and my family are for the kind gesture that you showered by taking care of me in that crucial situation when I met with an accident. Words are not enough to express my sincere gratitude towards you for supporting and looking after me when I was not in a condition to handle myself. Moreover, when nobody came forward, you offered me a helping hand without considering my background. You took me to the hospital even paid my bills and cared me like your own child at your residence. When my family came to know about the situation, first they got terrified but later on when I explained them about you, they were relaxed. I am also very glad to inform you that my graduation is completed and I reached back to my country last week. Now, as I am here, I would like to invite you and your family to my home to spend some quality time together with all of us. It will be a privilege for me to serve you during your stay with us and also I will get a chance to return the favour. Hope you will accept my invitation and will pay us a visit. RegardsRohan
Dear Mr. Francis

I am Rohan John, I hope you remember me. I am writing this letter to
let
you know that how thankful me and my family are for the kind gesture that you showered by taking care of me in that crucial situation when I met with an accident.

Words are not
enough
to express my sincere gratitude towards you for supporting and looking after me when I was not in a condition to handle myself.
Moreover
, when nobody came forward, you offered me a helping hand without considering my background. You took me to the hospital even paid my bills and cared me like your
own
child at your residence. When my family came to know about the situation,
first
they
got
terrified
but
later on when I
explained
them about you, they
were relaxed
.

I am
also
very
glad to inform you that my graduation
is completed
and I reached back to my country last week.
Now
, as I am here, I would like to invite you and your family to my home to spend
some
quality time together with all of us. It will be a privilege for me to serve you during your stay with us and
also
I will
get
a chance to return the
favour
.

Hope you will accept my invitation and will pay us a visit.

RegardsRohan
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IELTS letter After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him / her know why you are writing to him / her Express your gratitude Offer him / her to visit your home with his / her family

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  American English
5 paragraphs
225 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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