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I am writing this give a feedback on your cookery course that I have attended recently, It was great learning and fun as hands on cooking with very supportive course mates.

I am writing this give a feedback on your cookery course that I have attended recently, It was great learning and fun as hands on cooking with very supportive course mates. MKg6
I am writing this give a feedback on your cookery course that I have attended recently, It was great learning and fun as hands on cooking with very supportive course mates. I have learned baking cakes and making different types of curry which is very useful in my day to day life. Since the course is concluded I have done a lot of cooking especially making different cakes for my children, the step by step learning was so easy that now I can cook most of the cakes without any glitch. But the duration of the course could have been more as we only learned one dish a day. I would like know if you can organise one more course on the same pattern so that it can be more fulfilling and I can learn all the remaining cakes and dishes I want to learn, this time my friend Shweta will also be joining us as she is impressed by my cooking that I have learned in your course, looking forward to reply from you. Yours sincerely Amardeep Gupta
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that I have attended recently, It was great learning and fun as hands on cooking with
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types of curry which is
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useful in my
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is concluded
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cooking
especially
making
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cakes
for my children, the
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learning was
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so
easy that
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now
I can cook most of the
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cakes
without any glitch.
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But
the duration of the
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course
could have been more
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as
we
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learned one dish a day.

I would like know if you can
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organise
one more
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course
on the same pattern
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so
that it can be more fulfilling and I can learn all the remaining
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cakes
and dishes I want to learn, this time my friend
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Shweta
will
also
be joining us as she
is impressed
by my cooking that I have learned in your
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course
, looking forward
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from you.

Yours
sincerely


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IELTS letter I am writing this give a feedback on your cookery course that I have attended recently, It was great learning and fun as hands on cooking with very supportive course mates.

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