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Dear Shaan, I hope you are rocking the stages, I have attended your recent concert at my college that is IIT during our college festival.

Dear Shaan, I hope you are rocking the stages, I have attended your recent concert at my college that is IIT during our college festival. d1y7
Dear Shaan, I hope you are rocking the stages, I have attended your recent concert at my college that is IIT during our college festival. I want to express my appreciation on your performance especially the lyrics, the way you have written and sung it on the stage was awesome, I liked your opening song so much. I want to tell you that we also play pop music as a band, and we play on the same genre as you do, me being the singer always admired the sarcasm that you sing in, we have published 5 songs so far and all of them are available on YouTube. We are really very big fan of your music as one of our song is been sung on your lyrics. As lead vocalist of my band I politely request you to give me tips for the stage singing and tell us about the origin of the ideas of your songs as almost all of them are soul touching and reaches where you wanted it to reach, I hope I haven’t asked for too much looking forward to hear from you. Big fan of yours Ankit.
Dear
Shaan
,

I hope you are rocking the stages, I have attended your recent concert at my college
that is
IIT during our college festival. I want to express my appreciation on your performance
especially
the lyrics, the way you have written and sung it on the stage was awesome, I liked your opening song
so
much.

I
want to
tell
you that we
also
play pop music as a band, and we play on the same genre as you do, me being the singer always admired the sarcasm that you sing in, we have published 5 songs
so
far and all of them are available on YouTube. We are
really
very
big
fan of your music as one of our song
is been
sung on your lyrics.

As lead vocalist of my band I
politely
request you to give me tips for the stage singing and
tell
us about the origin of the
ideas
of your songs as almost all of them are soul touching and reaches where you wanted it to reach, I hope I haven’t
asked for
too much looking forward
to hear
from you.

Big
fan of yours

Ankit.
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IELTS letter Dear Shaan, I hope you are rocking the stages, I have attended your recent concert at my college that is IIT during our college festival.

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6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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