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Dear Tanya, How are you? I hope your journey was comfortable. I have an appointment with my dentist at 4 pm today, this is why I will not be at home when you will reach. However, I have left the keys with Mr Sharma at house #14. You can take the keys from him and enter the house. I have made some Chicken Biriyani for you and arranged the guest room upstairs so that you can take rest. When you arrive, your train will stop at the Central railway station. You need to take the exit towards Roma Street. Once you come out of the station, you need to turn right and walk 100 metres. You will find the bus stop number 58 on the opposite side of the road. You need to catch bus number 333 and get down at Robertson Stop. My address is: #27, Fleetwood St, Macgregor. I will be home by 5: 30 pm, and so will be Sam and Harry as well. We have planned to watch “The Dark Knight” at home. I will make smoked salmon with chicken salad and we can have some wine with the dinner as well. See you soon.

Dear Tanya,

How are you? I hope your journey was comfortable. I have an appointment with my dentist at 4 pm This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
, this is why I will not be at home when you will reach. However
, I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 the keys with Mr Sharma at This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 #14. You can take the keys from him and enter the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. I have made This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 Chicken Possible spelling mistake found.Biryani
Biriyani
 for you and arranged the guest room upstairs This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that you can take rest.

When you arrive, your train will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 at the Central railway station. You need to take the exit towards Roma Street. Once you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 out of the station, you need to turn right and walk 100 Possible spelling mistake. 'metres' is British English.meters
metres
. You will find the bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 number 58 on the opposite side of the road. You need to catch bus number 333 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 down at Robertson This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
Stop
. My address is: #27, Fleetwood St, Possible spelling mistake found.McGregor
Macgregor
. I will be home by 5: 30 pm, and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 will be Sam and Harry as well
. We have planned to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 “The Dark Knight” at home. I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 smoked salmon with chicken Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).salad, and
salad and
 we can have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 wine with the dinner as well
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
See
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. 