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ear Sir/Madam, I am Leonardo Gomes and I have recently passed a job interview for the Software Engineer position at the Software Infrastructure group.

ear Sir/Madam, I am Leonardo Gomes and I have recently passed a job interview for the Software Engineer position at the Software Infrastructure group. 6w3l
ear Sir/Madam, I am Leonardo Gomes and I have recently passed a job interview for the Software Engineer position at the Software Infrastructure group. I was expected to start on November 15, as agreed, and am writing because, unfortunately, I will not be able to present myself on that date. During the interview I estimated fifteen days as the amount of time needed for me to finish my activities at my current job and start at your company, but due to fact that I got sick for the last whole week and was not able to work, I could not finish my tasks and will need another week to do so. If necessary, I can give you a copy of a letter from my doctor informing that I had to stay at home and under medical care during that week. To clear the backlog created by my late start, I can work two additional hours every day until I catch up, either coming in early or leaving late. I feel responsible for the pressure my delayed start may have created on the company, and I am going to work harder until everything is back to normal. I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience and hope this will not affect our relationship. If I am expected to present any other form of proof or talk to someone else in the company, please let me know. Faithfully yours, Leonard
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. If necessary, I can give you a copy of a letter from my doctor informing that I had to stay at home and under medical care during that week.

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the backlog created by my late
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, I can work two additional hours every day until I catch up, either coming in early or leaving late. I feel responsible for the pressure my delayed
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start
may have created on the
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company
, and I am going to work harder until everything is back to normal.

I
sincerely
apologize for the inconvenience and hope this will not affect our relationship. If I am
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to present any other form of proof or talk to someone else in the
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company
,
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Faithfully
yours,

Leonard
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IELTS letter ear Sir/Madam, I am Leonardo Gomes and I have recently passed a job interview for the Software Engineer position at the Software Infrastructure group.

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