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You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take gleA
Dear John, I am writing this letter to inform you that I and my family are tenants at your house and some of the furniture is not in the condition we are not satisfied with it. I am a tenant in house no# 154 Block B in this society since last month. I am living with my father mother and sister. I have to go out for work and study I am new here in this country and my family cannot speak English properly as I can speak. They have a problem with the furniture of the home because its condition is not good for old parent's relaxation. Furniture is too much used and its threads and stuff is creating discomfort at my back. It can break any time with a heavy person. Please change your furniture or at least repair it for once. Sincerely.
Dear John,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I and my family are tenants at your
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house
and
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some of the
furniture is not in the condition we are not satisfied with it.

I am a tenant in
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house
no# 154 Block B in this society since last month.
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I
am living with my father mother and sister.
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I
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have to
go out for work and study I am new here in this country and my family cannot speak English
properly
as I can speak. They have a problem with the furniture of the home
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because
its condition is not
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good
for
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old
parent's relaxation.

Furniture is too much
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used
and its threads and stuff is creating discomfort at my back. It can break any time with a heavy person.

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Please
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change
your furniture or at least repair it for once.

Sincerely
.

IELTS letter You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

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  American English
6 paragraphs
145 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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