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A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in response to the advertisement in the local newspaper regarding part-time job posts that are available at your restaurant. I would like to express my interest in working at your restaurant. Currently, I am doing my master's at the University of Illinois. The course which I am taking here will only have 2 classes per day. It starts at 9 a. m. and goes long for 2 hours. As I am an international student, I need some money to survive and to spend on my other activities. Therefore, I have decided to work for the rest of my day to earn some money which may help to fulfill my needs. Back in my own country, my father owns a small restaurant, and I used to be there after my college. I had a great experience in interacting with customers and serving their orders. Hence, my skills include customer engagement, and I probably think that it is the experience that I believe sets me apart from other candidates. I would be grateful if you could provide me with the details furthermore like working hours of the day, pay for an hour, and week offs. I am ready to attend the interview this Saturday at your location at 11 a. m. Please let me know if that date and time are good for you. I would be grateful if you could respond at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Sanith Varma.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in response to the advertisement in the local newspaper regarding part-time job posts that are available at your restaurant. I would like to express my interest in working at your restaurant.

Currently
, I am doing my master's at the University of Illinois. The course which I am taking here will
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only
have 2 classes per day. It
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starts
at 9 a. m. and goes long for 2 hours. As I am an international student, I need
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some
money to survive and to spend on my other activities.
Therefore
, I have decided to work for the rest of my day to earn
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
money which may
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to fulfill my needs.

Back in my
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own
country, my father
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owns
a
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small
restaurant, and I
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used
to be there after my college. I had a great experience in interacting with customers and serving their orders.
Hence
, my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
include customer engagement, and I
probably
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that it is the experience that I believe sets me apart from other candidates.

I would be grateful if you could provide me with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
furthermore
like working hours of the day, pay for an hour, and week offs. I am ready to attend the interview this Saturday at your location at 11 a. m.
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Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know if that date and time are
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good
for you.

I would be grateful if you could respond at your earliest convenience.

Yours
faithfully
,

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IELTS letter A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
245 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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