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A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at the University. He has asked for an advise.

Dear Sharath, Hope you are doing great! . I have received your letter regarding the course that I am studying at the University of Texas. I am so glad that you considered the same course at the same university for your further education. As you are aware, I've opted for the 'Machine Learning' course here at the university. I believe that this course is quite interesting and is all about training a software application to think like a human. I remember that you told me that you were curious about Artificial Intelligence. So, I hope that you will really enjoy studying this course. Also, the University of Texas is the best university for students pursuing their masters in Information Technology. Many other IT related programs are taught exceptionally well here. This university was even awarded as the best university to teach AI in the entire USA. Hence, I recommend this as your go-to university. If you really wish to file an application, then the criteria suggest that you should pass the minimum of 315 in your GRE test and an average attendance of 80% in your academics. If you are eligible, then, fill the admission form on the university website and wait for a reply from the university. You shall receive the invitation from the university in just a couple of weeks. Just let me know if you need anything from my end. Best Wishes, Sanith Varma
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for your
further
education.

As you are aware, I've opted for the 'Machine Learning'
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course
here at the
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university
. I believe that this
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course
is quite interesting and is all about training a software application to
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think
like a human. I remember that you
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told
me that you were curious about Artificial Intelligence.
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So
, I hope that you will
really
enjoy studying this course.

Also
, the
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University
of Texas is the best
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university
for students pursuing their masters in Information Technology.
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Many
other IT related programs
are taught
exceptionally
well here. This
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university
was even awarded as the best
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university
to teach AI in the entire USA.
Hence
, I recommend this as your go-to university.

If you
really
wish to file an application, then the criteria suggest that you should pass the minimum of 315 in your GRE
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test
and an average attendance of 80% in your academics. If you are eligible, then, fill the admission form on the
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university
website and wait for a reply from the
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university
. You shall receive the invitation from the
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university
in
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just
a couple of weeks.

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let
me know if you need anything from my
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end
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Best Wishes,
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Sanith
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IELTS letter A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at the University. He has asked for an advise.

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