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A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. - Describe your point of view. - Say what you like about the show and why. - Ask the newspaper to take some action.

A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. - Describe your point of view. - Say what you like about the show and why. - Ask the newspaper to take some action. NXgb
Dear Mr Bradshaw, I am contacting you regarding the article where you unfairly criticized Top Gear, namely Jeremy Clarkson. Understandably Mr Clarkson is not everyone's cup of tea, however publicly complaining then lambasting him and the show is unfair. Their difference of opinion is under no circumstances an excuse to write a letter of complaint. Personally I feel that the shows ingenuity largely stems from the fact that their presenters are occasionally controversial and honest. This is unlike the modern TV shows which are bland, politically correct and just lacking any entertainment value for my liking. I would be very grateful if you could in future editions of your newspaper 'The Echo' only publish positive articles about the programme. Failing this small request could you please refrain from any undue negative press. Kind Regards, B. Worthington
Dear Mr Bradshaw,

I am contacting you regarding the article where you
unfairly
criticized Top Gear,
namely
Jeremy Clarkson.
Understandably
Mr Clarkson is not everyone's cup of tea,
however
publicly
complaining then lambasting him and the
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show
is unfair. Their difference of opinion is under no circumstances an excuse to write a letter of complaint.

Personally
I feel that the
Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "shows'" or "show's"?
shows
ingenuity
largely
stems from the fact that their presenters are
occasionally
controversial and honest. This is unlike the modern TV
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
which are bland,
politically
correct and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
lacking any entertainment value for my liking.

I would be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
grateful if you could in future editions of your newspaper 'The Echo'
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
publish
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
articles about the
Possible spelling mistake. 'programme' is British English.
programme
. Failing this
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small
request could you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
refrain from any undue
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
press.

Kind Regards,

B. Worthington

IELTS letter A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. - Describe your point of view. - Say what you like about the show and why. - Ask the newspaper to take some action.

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