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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. with this opinion? OJlj
A person’s worth nowadays seems to The rich and the famous command greater respect in the modern society. In fact, values such as kindness, generosity and honesty are becoming irrelevant. Therefore, I agree with the argument that worldly riches and social standing have become the new measures of a person’s worth. One of the reasons for this development is that the media encourages young people to follow the wrong role models. Also it has become difficult for ethical people to succeed in this immoral world. Youngsters these days choose the wrong people as their idols. They are misguided by the notion that a person should be wealthy and famous to be successful. They read about models, singers and actors having millions of followers on social media and want to be like them. They do not care whether the person they admire has character or integrity. They are blinded by the hype surrounding these people. Since they are always gazing at the ‘stars’, they do not get an opportunity to learn from the real heroes. Not surprisingly, a study conducted by a well-known university in 2016 revealed that 75% of girls aged between 14 and 18 years would rather be like Khloe Kardashian than Madam Curie or Mother Teresa. However, this does not mean that people with principles have gone extinct. They are still around but they cannot find their way to a position of power or success. More often than not we observe that the offices of power are held by rich and influential people who are morally corrupt. Youngsters who follow them on social media and elsewhere get the impression that the honest cannot succeed in this world. Consequently, they give up on their ideology and choose to tread the easy path that would take them to success. In conclusion, values have certainly become irrelevant in the twenty-first century. This could be due to various factors such as the influence of the media which constantly raves about the rich and the famous. Another factor that contributes to the demise of age-old values is the fact that honest and ethical people are struggling to succeed in this materialistic world.
A
person’s
worth nowadays seems to

The
rich
and the
famous
command greater respect in the modern society. In fact, values such as kindness, generosity and honesty are becoming irrelevant.
Therefore
, I
agree
with the argument that worldly
riches
and social standing have become the new measures of a
person’s
worth. One of the reasons for this development is that the
media
encourages young
people
to follow the
wrong
role models.
Also
it has become difficult for ethical
people
to succeed in this immoral world.

Youngsters these days choose the
wrong
people
as their idols. They
are misguided
by the notion that a
person
should be wealthy and
famous
to be successful. They read about models, singers and actors having millions of followers on social
media
and want to be like them.
They
do not care whether the
person
they admire has character or integrity.
They
are blinded
by the hype surrounding these
people
. Since they are always gazing at the ‘stars’, they do not
get
an opportunity to learn from the real heroes. Not
surprisingly
, a study conducted by a well-known university in 2016 revealed that 75% of girls aged between 14 and 18 years would
rather
be like
Khloe
Kardashian than Madam Curie or Mother Teresa.

However
, this does not mean that
people
with principles have gone extinct. They are
still
around
but
they cannot find their way to a position of power or success. More
often
than not we observe that the offices of power
are held
by
rich
and influential
people
who are
morally
corrupt. Youngsters who follow them on social
media
and elsewhere
get
the impression that the honest cannot succeed in this world.
Consequently
, they give up on their ideology and choose to tread the easy path that would take them to success.

In conclusion
, values have
certainly
become irrelevant in the twenty-
first
century. This could be due to various factors such as the influence of the
media
which
constantly
raves about the
rich
and the
famous
. Another factor that contributes to the demise of age-
old
values is the fact that honest and ethical
people
are struggling to succeed in this materialistic world.
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IELTS letter A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. with this opinion?

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