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A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the unpaid work. In your letter: Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum. Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. Give details of when you would be available for work.

A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the unpaid work. In your letter: Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum. Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. Give details of when you would be available for work. QL8kw
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my interest in applying for a part-time voluntary job position at your museum after learning about it from a local newspaper recently. I want to get this job because it will bestow me with an excellent opportunity to learn about the art and history of my country more directly. After all, your museum has some of the most valuable pieces of arts and artefacts from an era which was almost forgotten. Besides, this work would also offer me an opportunity for community involvement. Regarding my skills and qualifications, I have a rather easy-going personality, and I also have excellent communication skill, which would make it easy for me to get along with the visitors to your museum. I have also worked as a part-time hotel receptionist. So I do know a thing or two about dealing with different kinds of people and great customer service. Therefore, based on my enthusiasm, skills and experience, I think that I should be able to render a great service to your museum. I am available to work every day from 2: 00 pm to the closing hours. I hope you would spare a few of your precious moments to meet me to further discuss my candidacy for the post. Yours faithfully, Jim Buchanan
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my interest in applying for a part-time voluntary job position at your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
museum
after learning about it from a local newspaper recently.

I want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
this job
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it will bestow me with an excellent opportunity to learn about the art and history of my country more
directly
.
After all
, your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
museum
has
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
of the most valuable pieces of arts and
Possible spelling mistake. 'artefacts' is British English.
artefacts
from an era which was almost forgotten.
Besides
, this work would
also
offer me an opportunity for community involvement.

Regarding my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and qualifications, I have a
rather
easy-going personality, and I
also
have excellent communication
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
, which would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it easy for me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
along with the visitors to your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
museum
. I have
also
worked as a part-time hotel receptionist.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
I do know a thing or two about dealing with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
kinds of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
and great customer service.

Therefore
, based on my enthusiasm,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and experience, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that I should be able to render a great service to your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
museum
. I am available to work every day from 2: 00 pm to the closing hours. I hope you would spare a few of your precious moments to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
me to
further
discuss my candidacy for the post.

Yours
faithfully
,

Jim Buchanan
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IELTS letter A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the unpaid work. In your letter: Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum. Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. Give details of when you would be available for work.

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  American English
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219 words
6.5
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