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A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter • Explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum • Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful • Give details of when you would be available for work

A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter • Explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum • Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful • Give details of when you would be available for work KwW2k
Dear sir or Madam, I am writing in connection for the vacancy related to part time voluntary job at the museum. Since very young age I have been fond of our history, culture and traditions. This museum displays our origin, greatness of ancestors and their ways of living. It would be a great honor for me to embrace those parts of history. I also happen to have ample amount of time after my office hours. So I think this job would be best suited for me. I am a school teacher by profession with good knowledge in spoken English and computer skills. My communication and computer operation ability would be useful for museum in recording and taking tour of the visitors of Museum I work full time at secondary school from 9 to 2 pm. I would be available 6 days a week except weekends from 3 to 5 pm. I would be grateful if you could consider me for this job Yours sincierly Indra
Dear sir or Madam,

I am writing in connection for the vacancy related to
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part time
voluntary job at the museum. Since
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very
young age I have been fond of our history, culture and traditions. This museum displays our origin, greatness of ancestors and their ways of living. It would be a great honor for me to embrace those parts of history. I
also
happen to have ample amount of time after my office hours.
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So
I
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think
this job would be best suited for me.

I am a school teacher by profession with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
knowledge in spoken English and computer
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skills
. My communication and computer operation ability would be useful for museum in recording and taking tour of the visitors of Museum

I work full time at secondary school from 9 to 2 pm. I would be available 6 days a week except weekends from 3 to 5 pm.

I would be grateful if you could consider me for this job

Yours
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sincierly


Indra

IELTS letter A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter • Explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum • Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful • Give details of when you would be available for work

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