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You had dinner with your friend’s family. Write a letter to your friend and express your feelings about the dinner. In your letter, you should: Say what you enjoyed about the dinner Describe how you feel about his/her family Invite your friend and his/her family to you place

You had dinner with your friend’s family. Write a letter to your friend and express your feelings about the dinner. In your letter, you should: Say what you enjoyed about the dinner Describe how you feel about his/her family Invite your friend and his/her family to you place 3GEm
Dear Kunal, Are you over last weekend’s dinner? I can still feel the scrumptiousness on my tongue. I hope you and your family are doing fine. I am writing this letter to express my heartfelt gratitude for the day we had together. I simply loved every dish that your mother cooked, especially the steamed rice and Peri Peri chicken. Thinking of all the things that we had for dinner, my mouth still waters. Not just the food, but how your family made me feel was amazing as well. They welcomed and treated me like their own son. I was extremely comfortable at your place, and it didn’t feel like anything odd. I would like to invite you and your family to my place this weekend. Let’s have a get together again, and I would like to introduce you to my family as well. Is there something you would like to eat while at my place? See you this weekend! Your loving, Karan
Dear
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Kunal
,

Are you over last weekend’s dinner? I can
still
feel the
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scrumptiousness
on my tongue. I hope you and your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
are doing fine.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am writing this letter to express my heartfelt gratitude for the day we had together.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
simply
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
loved
every dish that your mother cooked,
especially
the steamed rice and
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Peri Peri
chicken. Thinking of all the things that we had for dinner, my mouth
still
waters. Not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
the food,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
how your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
made me feel was amazing
as well
. They welcomed and treated me like their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
son.

I was
extremely
comfortable at your place, and it didn’t feel like anything odd. I would like to invite you and your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
to my place this weekend.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
’s have a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
together again, and I would like to introduce you to my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
as well
.

Is there something you would like to eat while at my place?

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
See
you this weekend!

Your loving,

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Karan

IELTS letter You had dinner with your friend’s family. Write a letter to your friend and express your feelings about the dinner. In your letter, you should: Say what you enjoyed about the dinner Describe how you feel about his/her family Invite your friend and his/her family to you place

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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