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You had dinner with your friend’s family. Write a letter to your friend and express your feelings about the dinner. In your letter, you should: Say what you enjoyed about the dinner Describe how you feel about his/her family Invite your friend and his/her family to you place

You had dinner with your friend’s family. Write a letter to your friend and express your feelings about the dinner. In your letter, you should: Say what you enjoyed about the dinner Describe how you feel about his/her family Invite your friend and his/her family to you place bJXW
Dear Lucie, I would like to thank you for a great sumptuous dinner outing with you and your family. I don't have words to express my gratitude towards your family's generosity and such a lovely welcoming nature. I had mesmerized with an eclectic variety of spicy sea food and Chinese cuisine. I relished Chinese food especially with mustard sauce on it. I had a great time with your family while chit-chatting about the latest video games and movies. When you all were playing in the garden then I had a little time to gel-along with your grandmother. She had shared her hand knitted sweaters which are remarkable. It will be my pleasure to meet all of you again in the next month for having dinner at my home. Please do come along with you family. Also, don't forget to share our group picture that we had taken just after finishing the meal. God bless you. Best Regards, Chakshu
Dear Lucie,

I would like to thank you for a great sumptuous dinner outing with you and your family. I don't have words to express my gratitude towards your family's generosity and such a lovely welcoming nature.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
had mesmerized with an eclectic variety of spicy sea food and Chinese cuisine.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
relished Chinese food
especially
with mustard sauce on it.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
had a great time with your family while chit-chatting about the latest video games and movies.
“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
you all were playing in the garden then I had a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
time to gel-along with your grandmother. She had shared her hand knitted sweaters which are remarkable.

It will be my pleasure to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
all of you again in the
next
month for having dinner at my home.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
do
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
along with you family.

Also
, don't forget to share our group picture that we had taken
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
after finishing the meal. God bless you.

Best Regards,

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Chakshu

IELTS letter You had dinner with your friend’s family. Write a letter to your friend and express your feelings about the dinner. In your letter, you should: Say what you enjoyed about the dinner Describe how you feel about his/her family Invite your friend and his/her family to you place

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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