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You had dinner with your friend’s family. Write a letter to your friend and express your feelings about the dinner. In your letter, you should: Say what you enjoyed about the dinner Describe how you feel about his/her family Invite your friend and his/her family to you place

You had dinner with your friend’s family. Write a letter to your friend and express your feelings about the dinner. In your letter, you should: Say what you enjoyed about the dinner Describe how you feel about his/her family Invite your friend and his/her family to you place bJXW

Dear Lucie, I would like to thank you for a great sumptuous dinner outing with you and your family. I don't have words to express my gratitude towards your family's generosity and such a lovely welcoming nature. I had mesmerized with an eclectic variety of spicy sea food and Chinese cuisine. I relished Chinese food especially with mustard sauce on it. I had a great time with your family while chit-chatting about the latest video games and movies. When you all were playing in the garden then I had a little time to gel-along with your grandmother. She had shared her hand knitted sweaters which are remarkable. It will be my pleasure to meet all of you again in the next month for having dinner at my home. Please do come along with you family. Also, don't forget to share our group picture that we had taken just after finishing the meal. God bless you. Best Regards, Chakshu

Dear Lucie,

I would like to thank you for a great sumptuous dinner outing with you and your family. I don't have words to express my gratitude towards your family's generosity and such a lovely welcoming nature.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 had mesmerized with an eclectic variety of spicy sea food and Chinese cuisine. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 relished Chinese food especially
 with mustard sauce on it. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 had a great time with your family while chit-chatting about the latest video games and movies. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 you all were playing in the garden then I had a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 time to gel-along with your grandmother. She had shared her hand knitted sweaters which are remarkable.

It will be my pleasure to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 all of you again in the next
 month for having dinner at my home. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 do This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 along with you family.

Also
, don't forget to share our group picture that we had taken This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 after finishing the meal. God bless you.

Best Regards,

Possible spelling mistake found.CASHU
Chakshu