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One of your penfriends wants to improve his/her English in advance of moving to Sydney. Write a letter to your penfriend. Advise him/her about the following: listening skills, speaking skills and vocabulary.

One of your penfriends wants to improve his/her English in advance of moving to Sydney. Write a letter to your penfriend. Advise him/her about the following: listening skills, speaking skills and vocabulary. 0kRl
Dear Adam, Hope you are doing well. I am so glad to know that you are planning to move to Sydney, Australia for higher studies. You might know that English is the most spoken language in Sydney and I would advice you to start preparing beforehand. I would like to give you a few tips to improve the English speaking and listening by using the British Council youtube channel. In order to expertise in listening, you can download the Google podcast and subscribe at least two english channels of your liking. Speaking can be achieved by conversating with friends or you can interact with anonymous English native people on Cambly App. Also, don't forget to learn five to ten words every day and start using them in your day to day english speaking. Try to focus on the correct usage of grammar and tenses as fluency will come with time. Keep writing about your progress and do well in your upcoming exams. Break a leg. Best Wishes, Chakshu
Dear Adam,

Hope you are doing well. I am
so
glad to know that you are planning to
move
to Sydney, Australia for higher studies. You might know that English is the most spoken language in Sydney and I would
advice
you to
start
preparing beforehand.

I would like to give you a few tips to
improve
the English speaking and listening by using the British Council
youtube
channel. In order to expertise in listening, you can download the Google podcast and subscribe at least two
english
channels of your liking. Speaking can
be achieved
by
conversating
with friends or you can interact with anonymous English native
people
on
Cambly
App.

Also
, don't forget to learn five to ten words every day and
start
using them in your day to day
english
speaking. Try to focus on the correct usage of grammar and tenses as fluency will
come
with time.

Keep
writing about your progress and do well in your upcoming exams. Break a leg.

Best Wishes,

Chakshu
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IELTS letter One of your penfriends wants to improve his/her English in advance of moving to Sydney. Write a letter to your penfriend. Advise him/her about the following: listening skills, speaking skills and vocabulary.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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