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Write a letter to the principal of a college in which you got accepted and say that you cannot start your course Please include in your letter Which course had you applied for Why cannot you start Ask about the future courses availability. - Ask about the future courses availability.

Write a letter to the principal of a college in which you got accepted and say that you cannot start your course Please include in your letter Which course had you applied for Why cannot you start Ask about the future courses availability. - Ask about the future courses availability. MNKa

I am writting this letter to inform you I cannot start the course in this session. your college is very top most college in the city. I dream that admission in the college. This year i applied business management courses which famous courses in your college. Firstly, i am harry from ludhiana. My family financial condition not much better that time. My exam are completed and i applied the course but that time i gap this year from study because i cannot afford college fees. i know your college is best but i cannot afford your college fees in the course that why i cannot continue this session. I always dream it your college. next session i promised admission your college and fulfill my dreams. Thank for the capable me your college and call for interview. Your sincerely Harry

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 this letter to inform you I cannot This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
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 top most college in the city. I dream that admission in the college. This year Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 applied business management You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
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famous
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 in your college. Firstly
, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 am harry from Possible spelling mistake found.Ludhiana
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but
 that time i gap this year from study This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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 cannot afford college fees. Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 know your college is best This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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 cannot afford your college fees in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 that why Did you mean "I"?I
i
 cannot continue this session. I always dream it your college. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterNext
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 session Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 promised admission your college and fulfill my dreams. Thank for the capable me your college and call for interview. Your sincerely
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