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Write a letter to the principal of a college in which you got accepted and say that you cannot start your course Please include in your letter Which course had you applied for Why cannot you start Ask about the future courses availability. - Ask about the future courses availability.

Write a letter to the principal of a college in which you got accepted and say that you cannot start your course Please include in your letter Which course had you applied for Why cannot you start Ask about the future courses availability. - Ask about the future courses availability. MNKa
I am writting this letter to inform you I cannot start the course in this session. your college is very top most college in the city. I dream that admission in the college. This year i applied business management courses which famous courses in your college. Firstly, i am harry from ludhiana. My family financial condition not much better that time. My exam are completed and i applied the course but that time i gap this year from study because i cannot afford college fees. i know your college is best but i cannot afford your college fees in the course that why i cannot continue this session. I always dream it your college. next session i promised admission your college and fulfill my dreams. Thank for the capable me your college and call for interview. Your sincerely Harry
I am
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writting
this letter to inform you I cannot
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start
the
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course
in this session.
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your
college is
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very
top most college in the city. I dream that admission in the college. This year
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i
applied business management
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courses
which
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famous
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courses
in your college.
Firstly
,
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i
am harry from
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ludhiana
. My family financial condition not much better that time. My exam
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are
completed and
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i
applied the
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course
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but
that time i gap this year from study
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because
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i
cannot afford college fees.
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i
know your college is best
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but
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i
cannot afford your college fees in the
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course
that why
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i
cannot continue this session. I always dream it your college.
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next
session
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i
promised admission your college and fulfill my dreams. Thank for the capable me your college and call for interview. Your
sincerely
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Harry

IELTS letter Write a letter to the principal of a college in which you got accepted and say that you cannot start your course Please include in your letter Which course had you applied for Why cannot you start Ask about the future courses availability. - Ask about the future courses availability.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
138 words
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