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A local college wants people with a job to come and talk to students about what it is like to work. You would like to come forward and talk to the students about your job. Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter, explain what you would like to talk about say why students would be interested in your job suggest a possible date and time for the talk

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in connection to share mine working experience with fellow students of the college. To commence with, I like to share my professional experiences that I had learnt during job. This is because I want to make them aware about the practical or real life experience of the world that is quite different from what we expect. Students would be interested due to the following reason. Firstly, the job offer is the same field as they are studying now. Likewise, they have hands on experience till they complete their last semester which help them to remove the tag of fresher. Moreover, I would like to request you to provide a suitable time for open conversation with you along with students to make them aware of the facts. Even though, I am thinking to arrange formal communication on coming Saturday at pm. Hope to hear a positive response from your end. Yours sincerely, Tara Panchal

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experience
 with fellow students of the college.

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experiences
 that I had Possible spelling mistake. ‘learnt’ is British English.learned
learnt
 during job. This is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 them aware about the practical or real life You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainingmaturitypracticeunderstandingwisdompatience
experience
 of the world that is
 quite This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 from what we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
. Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
Students would be interested
 due to the following reason. Firstly
, the job offer is the same field as they are studying This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. Likewise
, they have The adjective “hands-on” is spelled with a hyphen.hands-on
hands on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainingmaturitypracticeunderstandingwisdompatience
experience
 till they complete their last semester which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 them to remove the tag of fresher.

Moreover
, I would like to request you to provide a suitable time for open conversation with you along with students to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 them aware of the facts. Even though
, I am thinking to arrange formal communication on coming Saturday at pm.  Hope to hear a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 response from your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
.

Yours sincerely
, Tara Possible spelling mistake found.PaschalAnchal
Panchal