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A letter to a museum executives

A letter to a museum executives 2q8M

Dear Sir or Madam, I have heard that you are looking for people to do part-time voluntary work in your museum and I would like to apply. I have always interested in the history of our nation and wanted to learn more about it, therefore this is a great opportunity for me to fulfill my desire. I am a local college graduate, I used to work as a guard for several institutions around the city. In my humble opinion, I suit the job pretty well, because I could help you take care of the exhibits. Also, I am able to deal with night shifts, so I believe that would be useful too. Currently, I work at a bakery part-time from 9 am to 1 pm on business days, so the rest of my time I can dedicate to the museum. I, personally, would prefer hours from 2 pm to 6 pm. Also, I would like to mention that I can start right away. Contact me if you have any questions, Best regards, John Miller

Dear Sir or Madam,

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people
 to do part-time voluntary work in your museum and I would like to apply. I have always interested in the history of our nation and wanted to learn more about it, therefore
 this is a great opportunity for me to fulfill my desire.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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used
 to work as a guard for several institutions around the city. In my humble opinion, I suit the job pretty well, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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help
 you take care of the exhibits. Also
, I am able to deal with night shifts, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I believe that would be useful too.

Currently
, I work at a bakery part-time from 9 am to 1 pm on business days, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 the rest of my time I can dedicate to the museum. I, personally
, would prefer hours from 2 pm to 6 pm. Also
, I would like to mention that I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 right away.

Contact me if you have any questions,

Best regards,

John Miller