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A letter from pen-friend in which he writes about his achievements in Chemistry

A letter from pen-friend in which he writes about his achievements in Chemistry GNLko
Hi Tom! I’m sorry I haven’t written for so long. I was snowed under some paperwork. But it’s great we can chat again. I see you’ve been into chemistry a lot lately. Good for you! As for me, I liked English and Maths classes when I was at school. My teachers tried their best to entertain me, showing how this boring theoretical information can be interestingly applied to everyday life. It’s so cool, isn’t it? Speaking of my current studies, I fing the knowledge of English and Mathematics quite essential. While studying to become a manager one day, talking fluently in a foreign language and having ability to think logically definitely help me. Such skills are inevitable when communicating. By the way, I understand how hard it can be to keep up with all studies. Firstly, you should make a schedule for every studying day to track your own efectiveness. Secondly, try to prioritise the subjects. Learn something easy at first and go for a harder material afterwards. Okay, I gotta go now - there is a plenty of homework to do. Hope to hear from you soon! Lots of love, Amanda
Hi Tom!

I’m sorry I haven’t written for
so
long. I
was snowed
under
some
paperwork.
But
it’s great we can chat again.

I
see
you’ve been into chemistry a lot lately.
Good
for you! As for me, I liked English and
Maths
classes when I was at school. My teachers tried their best to entertain me, showing how this boring theoretical information can be
interestingly
applied to everyday life. It’s
so
cool, isn’t it?

Speaking of my
current
studies, I
fing
the knowledge of English and Mathematics quite essential. While studying to become a manager one day, talking
fluently
in a foreign language and having ability to
think
logically
definitely
help
me. Such
skills
are inevitable when communicating.

By the way, I understand how
hard
it can be to
keep
up with all studies.
Firstly
, you should
make
a schedule for every studying day to
track
your
own
efectiveness
.
Secondly
, try to
prioritise
the subjects. Learn something easy at
first
and go for a harder material afterwards.

Okay, I
gotta
go
now
-
there is a
plenty
of homework to do. Hope to hear from you
soon
!

Lots of
love
,

Amanda
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IELTS letter A letter from pen-friend in which he writes about his achievements in Chemistry

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
191 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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