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A letter asking for advise

A letter asking for advise qLpRG

Dear John I would like appreciade it if you could give me some advise about doing a course at one of colleges in the London where you live still. I feel this an excellent opportunity to study for my knowledge and skills but I have not enought information and data about them. I really hope you can help me on this possiting with one of the sudden facts. I tend to study in London, is so expencive with high cost, that's way, you should advise me a collage or university which is suitable to my condition with a normally price. As you know, I am recently a simple waiter at restaurant where is near to my house, but I actually hope that I will have planed a gread deal of things to my future whenever my wishes'll be reached. On the other hand, I am going to work on somewhere when I will have free time besides studying for paying charge. I am really sure, you can give an excelant invitation to my possition. Please help me take this significant decision of my life. You are one person whom I can rely on a perfect and diffucult situation. I hope to hear from you soon. Your faithfully Norah.

Dear John I would like Possible spelling mistake found.appreciate
appreciade
 it if you could give me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
Did you mean "advice" (noun)?advice
advise
 about doing a course at one of colleges in the London where you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
still
. I feel this an excellent opportunity to study for my knowledge and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I have not Possible spelling mistake found.enoughen ought
enought
 information and data about them. I really
 hope you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me on this Possible spelling mistake found.positing
possiting
 with one of the sudden facts. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 tend to study in London, is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Possible spelling mistake found.expensive
expencive
 with high cost, that's way, you should advise me a collage or university which is suitable to my condition with a You used an adverb ('normally') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('price') instead of another adjective.
normally price
. As you know, I am recently a simple waiter at restaurant where is near to my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I actually hope that I will have planed a Possible spelling mistake found.greatreadbreadgreeddreadtread
gread
 deal of things to my future whenever my wishes'll be reached
. On the other hand
, I am going to work on somewhere when I will have free time besides
 studying for paying charge. I am really
 sure, you can give an Possible spelling mistake found.excel ant
excelant
 invitation to my Possible spelling mistake found.position
possition
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me take this significant decision of my life. You are one person whom I can rely on a perfect and Possible spelling mistake found.difficult
diffucult
 situation. I hope to hear from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. Your faithfully
 Norah. 