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A letter asking for advise

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Dear John I would like appreciade it if you could give me some advise about doing a course at one of colleges in the London where you live still. I feel this an excellent opportunity to study for my knowledge and skills but I have not enought information and data about them. I really hope you can help me on this possiting with one of the sudden facts. I tend to study in London, is so expencive with high cost, that's way, you should advise me a collage or university which is suitable to my condition with a normally price. As you know, I am recently a simple waiter at restaurant where is near to my house, but I actually hope that I will have planed a gread deal of things to my future whenever my wishes'll be reached. On the other hand, I am going to work on somewhere when I will have free time besides studying for paying charge. I am really sure, you can give an excelant invitation to my possition. Please help me take this significant decision of my life. You are one person whom I can rely on a perfect and diffucult situation. I hope to hear from you soon. Your faithfully Norah.
Dear John I would like
appreciade
it if you could give me
some
advise
about doing a course at one of colleges in the London where you
live
still
. I feel this an excellent opportunity to study for my knowledge and
skills
but
I have not
enought
information and data about them. I
really
hope you can
help
me on this
possiting
with one of the sudden facts.
I
tend to study in London, is
so
expencive
with high cost, that's way, you should advise me a collage or university which is suitable to my condition with a
normally price
. As you know, I am recently a simple waiter at restaurant where is near to my
house
,
but
I actually hope that I will have planed a
gread
deal of things to my future whenever my wishes'll
be reached
.
On the other hand
, I am going to work on somewhere when I will have free time
besides
studying for paying charge. I am
really
sure, you can give an
excelant
invitation to my
possition
.
Please
help
me take this significant decision of my life. You are one person whom I can rely on a perfect and
diffucult
situation. I hope to hear from you
soon
. Your
faithfully
Norah.
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IELTS letter A letter asking for advise

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
208 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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