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I am sorry,I lost your book

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Dear DiyorI am writing to apologies for I am sorry from your for I lost your book. One day I was walked a big garden and in my hand your book. It book name is ''Temur Tuzuklari''. After I sit down in a chair. I was read ''Temur Tuzuklari'' in the chair. That also I was walked in the garden. That I was swum in the swimmingpool. After I went to home. I am sorry, I lost your book. I am soory. I did not carefully for your book. I lost your book. If you want, I bought new book for you. Thank you for you read a I was wrote this letter. I understand that you are lost your book. I understand you sorry me and I bought a new book for you. I hope you will accept my apologies. Best wishes: Mr. Faxriyor
Dear
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DiyorI
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am
writing
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to apologies
for I am sorry from your for I
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lost
your
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book
. One day I
was walked
a
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big
garden and in my hand your
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book
. It
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book
name is ''
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Temur
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Tuzuklari
''.
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After
I sit down in a chair. I
was read
''
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Temur
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Tuzuklari
'' in the chair. That
also
I
was walked
in the garden. That I
was swum
in the
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swimmingpool
. After I
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went to home
. I am sorry, I
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lost
your
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book
. I am
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soory
.
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I
did not
carefully
for your
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book
.
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I
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lost
your
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book
. If you want, I
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bought
new
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book
for you. Thank you for you read
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a I
was
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wrote
this letter. I understand that you are
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lost
your
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book
. I understand you sorry me and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
a new
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book
for you.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope you will accept my apologies. Best wishes: Mr.
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Faxriyor
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IELTS letter I am sorry,I lost your book

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
144 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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