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I'm sorry. I hurt your feelings

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Dear JasurI am writing to apologise for you. You are my favourite person on earth. I hurt your feelings. I want you to se that I am doing were thing. I can to become a better person. I am sorry hurting you. I don't know the best way to say sorry in a text but I wanted to apologise now and not wait. I will never for give my self for the way I hurt you. I hope that I can prove my self worthy in your eyes. Please know that I am deeply sorry for all of the gries that I have caused you much awful pain and heartache. You are a tryful wonderful person who descries to by treated with love and respect and I really failed you. I will ever cause you so much pain again. They all work together helping each other. It was a nice feeling. I felt part of it too. I'll send next time. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Please find it in your heart to forgive me. Best wishes Yunusov Abdulaziz
Dear
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JasurI
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am
writing to
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apologise
for you. You are my
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favourite
person on earth. I hurt your feelings. I want you to
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se that
I am doing were thing.
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I
can to become a better person.
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I
am sorry hurting you.
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I
don't know the best way to say sorry in a text
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but
I wanted to
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apologise
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now
and not wait.
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I
will never for give my self for the way I hurt you.
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I
hope that I can prove my self worthy in your eyes.
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Please
know that I am
deeply
sorry for
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all of the
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gries
that I have caused you much awful pain and heartache. You are a
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tryful
wonderful person who descries to by treated with
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love
and respect and I
really
failed you. I will ever cause you
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so
much pain again. They all work together helping each other. It was a nice feeling. I felt part of it too. I'll
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send
next
time. Looking forward to hearing from you
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soon
.
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Please
find it in your heart to forgive me. Best wishes
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Yunusov
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Abdulaziz
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IELTS letter I'm sorry. I hurt your feelings

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
180 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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