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A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter i) tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves. ii) say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her. iii) explain how to apply for the job.

A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter i) tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves. ii) say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her. iii) explain how to apply for the job. ak3d
Dear Aby, Hope you are doing good! I came across a job opening last week in a company where my sister is the HR. This is a start up firm and are looking for candidates with 0-4 years of work experience under digital marketing. The role requires content strategist and as my memory serves your past employment experience looks relevant to this role. Your internship after college in with the "Global Digital Heads" in Bangalore can also be a add-on. As it is a start up firm, you will come across various opportunities that would want your ideas and explore yourself in different areas. Also, they require you to work for not more than 9 hours with Saturday and Sunday being your week off's. I strongly recommend you to try for this role as I feel this job is most suitable to you and will help you find yourself comfortable and happy with doing something you like. I have enclosed the job description in the attachment for your reference. If you wish to apply for this position, I can help you get through my sisters referral. Looking forward for your response, Yours faithfully, John
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I came across a job opening last week in a
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where my sister is the HR. This is a
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start
up firm and are looking for candidates with 0-4 years of work experience under digital marketing. The role requires content strategist and as my memory serves your past employment experience looks relevant to this role. Your internship after college in with the
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Global Digital Heads
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in Bangalore can
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up firm, you will
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across various opportunities that would want your
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I
strongly
recommend you to try for this role as I feel this job is most suitable to you and will
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you find yourself comfortable and happy with doing something you like. I have enclosed the job description in the attachment for your reference. If you wish to apply for this position, I can
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help
you
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through my sisters referral.

Looking forward for your response,

Yours
faithfully
, John

IELTS letter A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter i) tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves. ii) say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her. iii) explain how to apply for the job.

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