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You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, • explain why you have moved • describe the new house • invite your friend to come and visit

You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, • explain why you have moved • describe the new house • invite your friend to come and visit YOnB
Dear John, Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to inform you that i have shifted to another house. As you know, I was living in a flat near the construction site in Delhi where huge workers were living in that area. And i always disturbed by the noise which made by them. Due to this, it was quite difficult for me to stay in that area. Moreover, it was far away from my company and i had to face a lot of difficulties while travelling. So that’s why i had decided to move another place. Furthermore, my new apartment is very spacious and ventilated and it is located near my company. So i can easily go there within few minutes. Hence, all basic amenities like garage, public park are well maintained by the local authority. Now, i feel very happy to live in this apartment. One more thins, i must say here, i do not need to share my flat with other person because it is available at reasonable price. So, i would like to invite you to stay with me for couple of days where we can spend quality of time with each other without any trouble. I will be awaiting for you. Lots of love, Siya,
Dear John,

Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to inform you that
i
have shifted to another
house
.

As you know, I was living in a flat near the construction site in Delhi where huge workers were living in that area. And
i
always disturbed by the noise which made by them. Due to this, it was quite difficult for me to stay in that area.
Moreover
, it was far away from my
company
and
i
had to face
a lot of
difficulties while travelling.
So
that’s why
i
had decided to
move
another place.
Furthermore
, my new apartment is
very
spacious and ventilated and it
is located
near my
company
.
So
i
can
easily
go there within few minutes.
Hence
, all basic amenities like garage, public park are well maintained by the local authority.
Now
,
i
feel
very
happy to
live
in this apartment. One more thins,
i
must
say here,
i
do not need to share my flat with other person
because
it is available at reasonable price.

So
,
i
would like to invite you to stay with me for
couple of
days where
we can spend quality of time with each other without any trouble.

I will be
awaiting for
you.

Lots of
love
,

Siya
,
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IELTS letter You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, • explain why you have moved • describe the new house • invite your friend to come and visit

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
212 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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