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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Peter I hope you and your family are doing well. I am writing in response to your complaint about noise that you have been receiving from our apartment from last few weeks. Firstly I'm apologize for make you disturb with loud noises. That's all because we are renovating our kitchen with few changes and for that I hired few people those always come to our home for work from early mornings to mid nights. They are using highly noisy equipments to do all things. But, still I requested them to try doing all things with keeping low volume. And our renovation is going to be finish within few more days. Lastly, I am extending my apology to you to make your peace disturb. And I'm looking forward you to see at my home for dinner when, this renovation will finish. Your sincerely Rajwinder kaur
Dear Peter

I hope you and your family are doing well. I am writing in response to your complaint about noise that you have been receiving from our apartment from last few weeks.

Firstly
I'm
Consider using either the past participle “apologized” or the present participle “apologizing” here.
apologize
for
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make
you disturb with loud noises. That's all
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because
we are renovating our kitchen with few
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changes
and for that I hired few
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people
those always
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come
to our home for work from early mornings to mid nights. They are using
highly
noisy equipments to do all things.

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But
,
still
I requested them to try doing all things with keeping low volume. And our renovation is going to be finish within few more days.

Lastly
, I am extending my apology to you to
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make
your peace disturb. And I'm looking forward you to
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see
at my home for dinner when, this renovation will finish.

Your
sincerely


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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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  American English
7 paragraphs
144 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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