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Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go on the trip Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask other questions about the trip

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to express my interest in accompanying my son on the school trip the school trip to the USA. I was already planning a trip to the USA with my child but due to my busy schedule we could not travel. However, I will be available next month so it will be a great opportunity for me to join my son on this school trip. I have visited the USA multiple times and I am very familiar with the cities that your school is planning to visit; therefore, I think I will be able to share a lot of useful information with the students going on the trip. However, I have two questions related to the trip. Firstly, what will be the mode of transportation between the cities in the USA? Secondly, are we supposed to book the hotels ourselves or will it be done by the school administration? I really hope that you will allow me to join my son on the trip. Thank you for your consideration.

Dear Sir/Madam,

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Thank you for your consideration. 