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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday - describe some possible disadvantages - say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday - describe some possible disadvantages - say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer kQoN
Hi Matt, It has been quite some time since our last meeting, and I hope you are doing well. I received your letter and will try to provide the best recommendation about your upcoming holidays. I truly believe that you should not contemplate long about deciding on whether to spend your vacation in a camp or not. You need to give it a go, if you have not tried it before. I am more than certain it is going to be an amazing time period. This is mainly because you are going to meet interesting people from different regions and make lots of new friends. Additionally, the life in a camping outside the city and surrounded by nature will switch your mind from the problems you may have at work. On the other hand, please bear in mind that there will also be some drawbacks. For example, you may experience some communication problems like access to internet or mobile connectivity will not be the same easy way you had them from the comfort of your room. Moreover, getting the products and preparation of meals will require some extra efforts compared to shopping in the market or cooking on oven. I would love to accompany you in your first camping, but unfortunately I have some current projects at work with close deadlines. Truly yours, Your friend Jeffrey
Hi Matt,

It has been quite
some
time since our last meeting, and I hope you are doing well. I received your letter and will try to provide the best recommendation about your upcoming holidays.

I
truly
believe that you should not contemplate long about deciding on whether to spend your vacation in a camp or not. You need to give it a go, if you have not tried it
before
.

I am more than certain it is going to be an amazing time period. This is
mainly
because
you are going to
meet
interesting
people
from
different
regions and
make
lots of new friends.

Additionally
, the life in a camping outside the city and surrounded by nature will switch your mind from the problems you may have at work.

On the other hand
,
please
bear in mind that there will
also
be
some
drawbacks.

For example
, you may experience
some
communication problems like access to internet or mobile connectivity will not be the same easy way you had them from the comfort of your room.

Moreover
, getting the products and preparation of meals will require
some
extra efforts compared to shopping in the market or cooking on oven.

I would
love
to accompany you in your
first
camping,
but
unfortunately I have
some
current
projects at work with close deadlines.

Truly
yours,

Your friend Jeffrey
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IELTS letter A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday - describe some possible disadvantages - say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Letter
  American English
11 paragraphs
225 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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