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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice.

A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. PNxJ
Dear Mandeep, Hopefully you and your family are doing well. My apologies for not being in touch lately, but I am making up for it via this letter; at least I hope so! I understand you are looking forward for camping this summer, sounds a great idea! As you know during pandemic, our lives have been affected extremely. I am so happy we have sailed through the winters and we are ready for some warmth this summer. I am amazed to know that you are planning to go camping this summer. As a software engineer, you spend most of your time in front of the laptop. Camping will be a great change from the usual routine. It is refreshing to be out in the lap of nature and explore the greenery. The bonfire is my favorite part, when you have your loved ones along with good food and music. Moreover, being away from technology, will help you relax. Furthermore, there are few important aspects to be taken care of. In case, you have some insect allergy, that can be a problem. There are a lot of flies, don’t forget to carry an insect repellant spray and balm. You will have to set up a tent, make your own food. There can be rodents out there, they seem creepy to me. Camping has always been a lot of fun for me. It reminds me of the good times with my family. My parents loved camping, and have passed it onto me. If possible, I would love to accompany you for camping holiday. If you plan in advance, I will be able to request for a week’s leave. I hope I am able to help you in your decision. Don’t forget to update me whatever you decide. Take care of yourself! I cannot wait to see you in the near future, and please keep in touch! Best Regards. Binny.
Dear
Mandeep
,

Hopefully
you and your family are doing well. My apologies for not being in touch lately,
but
I am making up for it via this letter; at least I hope
so
! I understand you are looking forward for camping this summer, sounds a great
idea
! As you know during pandemic, our
lives
have been
affected
extremely
. I am
so
happy we have sailed through the
winters and
we are ready for
some
warmth this summer.

I
am amazed
to know that you are planning to go camping this summer. As a software engineer, you spend most of your time in front of the laptop. Camping will be a great
change
from the usual routine. It is refreshing to be out in the lap of nature and explore the greenery. The bonfire is my favorite part, when you have
your
loved
ones along with
good
food and music.
Moreover
, being away from technology, will
help
you relax.

Furthermore
, there are few
important
aspects to
be taken
care of. In case, you have
some
insect allergy, that can be a problem. There are
a lot of
flies, don’t forget to carry an insect
repellant
spray and balm. You will
have to
set up a tent,
make
your
own
food. There can be rodents out there, they seem creepy to me.

Camping has always been
a lot of
fun for me. It reminds me of the
good
times with my family. My parents
loved
camping, and have passed it onto me. If possible, I would
love
to accompany you for camping holiday. If you plan in advance, I will be able to request for a week’s
leave
.

I hope I am able to
help
you in your decision. Don’t forget to update me whatever you decide.

Take care of yourself! I cannot wait to
see
you in the near future, and
please
keep
in touch!

Best Regards.

Binny
.
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IELTS letter A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice.

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  American English
9 paragraphs
317 words
6.0
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