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There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

DearIn the mentioned above bus services problems, in my opinion there are someservies problems that i am facing in my city bus services, the main problem that i faced during travelling is that there are many peoples travelling in same time in same bus that will create too many problem in bus like hesitation, peoples are standing in bus. The main effects of the problem is shortage of buses, the time table is not corrected. buses are not departed in time. other major problem is too much traffic on the road that affects our bus service. my suggestion is that first of all we need to ensure our bus departure and arrival time is perfectly accurate, the other option is rise up the quantity of buses and the last one option in my opinion to resolve the traffic issues like signals and parking. if we follow the above mentioned rule and suggestion we will resolve our all problems related bus services.
DearIn
the mentioned above bus services
problems
, in my opinion there are
someservies
problems
that
i
am facing in my city bus services, the main
problem
that
i
faced during travelling is that there are
many
peoples travelling in same
time
in same bus that will create too
many
problem
in bus like hesitation, peoples are standing in bus.

The main effects of the
problem
is shortage of buses, the
time table
is not corrected.
buses
are not departed in
time
.
other
major
problem
is too much traffic on the road that affects our bus service.

my
suggestion is that
first of all
we need to ensure our bus departure and arrival
time
is
perfectly
accurate, the other option is rise up the quantity of buses and the last one option in my opinion to resolve the traffic issues like signals and parking.
if
we follow the above mentioned
rule
and suggestion we will resolve our all
problems
related bus services.
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IELTS letter There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

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