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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Is advertising increase people's tendency towards more shopping or it just introduces new products? This question has been at the center of the global debate for several years. It is probably true to say that some proponents claim that the advertisement industry has lots of benefits to offer such as, showing new products but, I think that this industry more manipulate people to buy stuff that they do not really need. I believe that not only it simply over-rate a product but also, exagerate the result in an unrealistic way. To begin with, the main problem with advertising is that it causes people to buy things without even thinking of their needs, and this attitude has brought certain issues in terms of economic and global warming problems. It is a fact that there is an increased propensity for people to shop more due to the materialistic culture that we face in recent years therefore, it makes sense that producers use this behavior and show-off the use of some features in a product more than they are really useful. For instance, according to a recent survey conducted by Cambridge University, the overwhelming predominance of people porches new cell-phones just because they told it has useful features more than the previous one. Moreover, in some advertising the result of using a product shows in an unrealistic way which I see this as a negative impact on mental health becase it rise people expectation to an unreachable level. For exapmple, some experts claim that there is a direct correlation between buying skin care products and the skin of the acteress who played an advertisement. In conclusion, consider all the strengths and weaknesses, although, this theory still has its opponents, I tend to agree with this concern which is advertising encourages people to porches thing that they do not really need.
Is advertising increase
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people
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shopping or
it
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just
introduces new
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products
? This question has been at the center of the global debate for several years. It is
probably
true to say that
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some
proponents claim that the advertisement industry has lots of benefits to offer such as, showing new
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products
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but
, I
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think
that this industry more manipulate
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people
to
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buy
stuff that they do not
really
need. I believe that not
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only
it
simply
over-rate a
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product
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but
also
,
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exagerate
the result in an unrealistic way.

To
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begin
with, the main problem with advertising is that it causes
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people
to
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buy
things without even thinking of their needs, and this attitude has brought certain issues in terms of economic and global warming problems. It is a fact that there is an increased propensity for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to shop more due to the materialistic culture that we face in recent years
therefore
, it
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makes
sense that producers
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use
this behavior and
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show
-off the
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use
of
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some
features in a
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product
more than they are
really
useful.
For instance
, according to a recent survey conducted by Cambridge University, the overwhelming predominance of
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people
porches new cell-phones
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just
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because
they
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told
it has useful features more than the previous one.

Moreover
, in
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some
advertising the result of using a
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product
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shows
in an unrealistic way which I
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see
this as a
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negative
impact on mental health
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becase
it
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rise
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people
expectation to an unreachable level. For
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exapmple
,
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some
experts claim that there is a direct correlation between buying skin care
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products
and the skin of the
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acteress
who played an advertisement.

In conclusion
, consider all the strengths and weaknesses, although, this theory
still
has its opponents, I tend to
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agree
with this concern which is advertising encourages
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people
to porches thing that they do not
really
need.

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
307 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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