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You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, describe the training course you want to do explain what the company could do to help you say how the course will be useful for your job

Dear Mr Ahmadi, I am writing this letter to express my interest to attend at an important training course in London. As a marketing manager, through the evaluation of financial documents, I realized that sales of the company's products have declined over the past few months. Since this training course is related to new marketing methods, interaction with domestic and foreign companies and effective communication with customers, I think it can contribute to improve the company status and better sales of products. In my opinion, this course can be useful for learning new marketing methods, interaction with other companies, and proper communicate with customers. I believe that this course will probably contribute to the company progress in the near future. During this period, which lasts for 3 months, I try to gather complete information about the market situation and talk to other companies to attract investors. finally I would be highly appreciated if you could to approve my request. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Soodabe Fooladi

Dear Mr Ahmadi,

I am writing this letter to express my interest to attend at an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 training You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 in London.

As a marketing manager, through the evaluation of financial documents, I realized that sales of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
's products have declined over the past few months. Since this training You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
is related
 to new marketing methods, interaction with domestic and foreign You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
 and effective communication with customers, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it can contribute to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 status and better sales of products.

In my opinion, this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 can be useful for learning new marketing methods, interaction with other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
, and proper communicate with customers. I believe that this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 will probably
 contribute to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 progress in the near future. During this period, which lasts for 3 months, I try to gather complete information about the market situation and talk to other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
 to attract investors.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Finally
finally
 I would be highly
 appreciated if you could to approve my request.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.Suitable
Soodabe
Possible spelling mistake found.Fooled
Fooladi