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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Dear neighbours, A day before, I received a letter from you which complaining about the noise from my house. I am apologise to the noise producted by me. Regarding to the noise, it is becasue I am going to take part in a music concert. Although I have experience in take part in the concert, this is the first time I play in front of a thousand people. Therefore practise more is the only way to success. However, it produces distrubutance to you. In order to reduse the affaction, I am going to have the practise only during the office hour, which from 9am to 6pm, to make sure you will have a quite environment for sleep. In addition, the concert will be hold on this Sunday. Hope you will accept my apologise. If you have any better solutions, do contact me and I will try to make it works. Yours sincerely, Kan
Dear neighbours,

A day
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before
, I received a letter from you which complaining about the noise from my
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house
. I am apologise to the noise producted by me.

Regarding to the noise, it is becasue I am going to
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take part
in a music concert. Although I have experience in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
take part
in the concert, this is the
first
time I play in front of a thousand
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people
.
Therefore
practise more is the
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only
way to success.

However
, it produces distrubutance to you. In order to reduse the affaction, I am going to have the practise
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
during the office hour, which from 9am to 6pm, to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure you will have a quite environment for sleep.

In addition
, the concert will be hold on this Sunday. Hope you will accept my apologise. If you have any better solutions, do contact me and I will try to
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make
it works.

Yours
sincerely
,

Kan

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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