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Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbor to come

Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbor to come jLmN
Dear Paul, I am Jaise your new neighbor moved in recently to this location. I am writing this letter to inform and invite you to a birthday party of my son on this Sunday at 8 pm. I am excited to meet you on this auspicious occation as our friends and family gather together. I am planning to begin party exactly at 8 pm with cake cutting and later with a dinner. I would like to inform you that there will be some music and dance programmes will be conducted afterwards. So I expect you full co-operation to make the event successful. I hope to wind up the programme sharp at 11 pm. I would also like to invite you and your family to the event. I hope to see you on this day and need your permission for setting sound arrangements and parking in front of your house. Yours Sincerely, Jaise
Dear Paul,

I am
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Jaise
your new neighbor
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moved
in recently to this location. I am writing this letter to inform and invite you to a birthday party of my son on this Sunday at 8 pm.

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I
am excited
to
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meet
you on this auspicious
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occation
as our friends and family gather together.
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I
am planning to
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begin
party exactly at 8 pm with cake cutting and later with a dinner.
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I
would like to inform you that there will be
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some
music and dance
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programmes
will
be conducted
afterwards.
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So
I
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expect
you full co-operation to
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make
the
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event
successful. I hope to wind up the
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programme
sharp at 11 pm. I would
also
like to invite you and your family to the
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event
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope to
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see
you on this day and need your permission for setting sound arrangements and parking in front of your
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house
.

Yours
Sincerely
,

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Jaise

IELTS letter Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbor to come

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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