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A friend of yours is applying for the same course that you did at university. She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: 1. Give the details of the course you took at university 2. Explain why you recommend the university 3. Give some advice about how to apply. Write at least 150 words.

A friend of yours is applying for the same course that you did at university. She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: 1. Give the details of the course you took at university 2. Explain why you recommend the university 3. Give some advice about how to apply. xmOe1
Dear Alexa, How have you been? It's been too long since we're last in touch. I learned that you wanted my advice regarding the course that I studied at University. I hope this letter gives you more information. First of all, the name of my course was Construction Management. This course forms the basis and covers all the important aspects of the construction process. The course duration is 52 weeks with just 20 hours a week of lectures. All the professors are highly qualified and always keen to help you with your doubts. Furthermore, not only Tata University has a reputation in Engineering field, but also it is ranked among the top 10 Engineering universities of India. According to recent news, 90% of students, graduated from Tata University, are currently working in world's leading companies. Last but not least, its campus is also at the outskirts of your town so it will be very easy for you in terms of commute. Lastly, applying for this course is very easy. You just need to go their website where you can simply follow all the steps and get enrolled in the course. You can also call on their helpline number if have any queries. I will be pleased to supply any further information you require. Best regards, Harry.
Dear Alexa,

How have you been? It's been too long since we're last in touch. I learned that you wanted my advice regarding the
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course
that I studied at
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University
. I hope this letter gives you more information.

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First of all
, the name of my
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course
was Construction Management. This
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course
forms the basis and covers all the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
aspects of the construction process. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
duration is 52 weeks with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
20 hours a week of lectures. All the professors are
highly
qualified and always keen to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you with your doubts.

Furthermore
, not
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only
Tata
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University
has a reputation in Engineering field,
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but
also
it
is ranked
among the top 10 Engineering
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universities
of India. According to recent news, 90% of students, graduated from Tata
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University
, are
currently
working in world's leading
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companies
. Last
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but
not least, its campus is
also
at the outskirts of your town
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so
it will be
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very
easy for you in terms of commute.

Lastly
, applying for this
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course
is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
easy. You
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just
need to go their website where you can
simply
follow all the steps and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
enrolled in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. You can
also
call on their helpline number if have any queries.

I will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
pleased
to supply any
further
information you require.

Best regards,

Harry.

IELTS letter A friend of yours is applying for the same course that you did at university. She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: 1. Give the details of the course you took at university 2. Explain why you recommend the university 3. Give some advice about how to apply.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
216 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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