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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take xmOq1
Dear, I know that you are very upset for the noise created from my house which actually due to the arrival of my relatives in these vacation times. As you all aware that 3 days back they arrived along with their kids and that too the kids are very small by age. I really request you to be patient till two more days as we have a small family gathering and I apologize for the disturbance caused to you. I will try to reduce the noise as much as possible by closing the doors and make sure that the gathering will be within our flat's limits and controlling the kids so that they will not make too much noise and I promise it will not effect much as compared before. I hope you will consider my apology and allow me for my family gathering which will be held by this weekend. Thanking You.
Dear,

I know that you are
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very
upset for the noise created from my
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house
which actually due to the arrival of my relatives in these vacation times. As you all aware that 3 days back they arrived along with their kids and that
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too the
kids are
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very
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small
by age.

I
really
request you to be patient till two more days as we have a
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small
family gathering and I apologize for the disturbance caused to you.

I will try to
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reduce
the noise as much as possible by closing the doors and
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make
sure that the gathering will be within our flat's limits and controlling the kids
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so
that they will not
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make
too much noise and I promise it will not
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effect
much as compared
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before
.

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I
hope you will consider my apology and
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allow
me for my family gathering which will
be held
by this weekend.

Thanking You.

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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