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You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you

You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you 6xLE8
Dear Robert, I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing this to let you know about a cars exhibition which I have attended last week in my hometown. Let me elaborate about the event. It was conducted by Tata motors, where they exhibited number of their new models of cars. And they were providing proper information about features and specifications of vehicles. I had a great time there. We both know that you are very much into automobiles and they fascinates you. Perhaps, if you were here you could get the opportunity to see your favorite car 'Swift Desire', it was also in the exhibition. Fortunately, due to the great public response and interest of local people they have decided that they will again organize the event in next week on Sunday. Therefore, it would be grateful of you if you could come and join me this time. I promise you that we would have a wonderful time together. Hope to see you soon and stay safe. Your loving, Ketan Kumar
Dear Robert, I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing this to
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exhibition which I have attended last week in my hometown.
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Let
me elaborate about the
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event
. It
was conducted
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Tata motors
, where they exhibited number of their new models of cars. And they were providing proper information about features and specifications of vehicles. I had a great time there. We both know that you are
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very
much into
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automobiles and
they
The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "fascinate"
fascinates
you. Perhaps, if you were here you could
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get
the opportunity to
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see
your favorite car 'Swift Desire', it was
also
in the exhibition.
Fortunately
, due to the great public response and interest of local
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people
they have decided that they will again organize the
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event
in
next
week on Sunday.
Therefore
, it would be grateful of you if you could
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come
and
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join
me this time. I promise you that we would have a wonderful time together.

Hope to
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see
you
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soon
and stay safe.

Did you mean "you're" or "you are"?
Your
loving,
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Ketan
Kumar

IELTS letter You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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