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You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take

You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take 0AlD5
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with my stay at your hotel "Sheraton Grand, due to the functioning of the air conditioner, the three nights I spent at the hotel were quite miserable. Lets me explain my situation. The problem started when my plaine landed in the airport, and I was extremely surprised with the unexpected weather condition, it was 30°. As a result, the hotel rooms were extremely hot. After the checking in process I needed some rest, so I tried to turn on the air condition but it didn't work and some odd noises came out of it. I called the reception for help but no help arrived, so I had to leave the windows open the entire night. Consequently I had a very little because of the traffic that is surround the hotel building. I chose you hotel, after the positive reviews I read but I feel that I have been chagrin. If you could only check all your rooms facilities before allocating room for customers. Also, I would like to receive a partial refund for the extra money I paid to get an AC in my room Please look into the matter at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Dana Zeitouni
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with my stay at your
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Sheraton Grand, due to the functioning of the air conditioner, the three nights I spent at the
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hotel
were quite miserable.

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when my
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landed in the airport, and I was
extremely
surprised with the unexpected weather condition, it was 30°.
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, the
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rooms were
extremely
hot.

After the checking in process I needed
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rest,
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I tried to turn on the air condition
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it didn't work and
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odd noises came out of it. I called the reception for
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help
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no
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arrived,
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I had to
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the windows open the entire night.
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I had a
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building.

I chose you
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hotel
, after the
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positive
reviews I read
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but
I feel that I have been chagrin. If you could
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only
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check
all your rooms facilities
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before
allocating room for customers.
Also
, I would like to receive a partial refund for the extra money I paid to
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get
an AC in my room

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Please
look into the matter at your earliest convenience.

Yours
faithfully
,

Dana
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IELTS letter You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take

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206 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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